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Becoming Hinata part 1 tgar

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Ryan was sitting in class, bored out of his. It was the beginning of the school year, so Ryan’s mind was still stuck in summer mood. What was worst was that he could no longer watch Naruto episodes whenever he felt like it. So, to pass the time, he was thinking about his favorite character, Hinata, in a bathing suit. Somehow this made the day longer. Ryan couldn’t decide which was better, day dreaming and pounding his head on the desk. Both were entertaining, but neither sped up the day. Man, thought Ryan, I really wish I could be Hinata from Naruto, so that I don’t have to sit in this boring class. A voice whispered, “When this class ends, your wish will come true.” Ryan snaps up, looks around, and then thinks that someone was playing with him. As the bell rang, Ryan picked up his stuff and walked to the door. As soon as he passed through, he stopped, and looked around. This isn’t the campus hallway, thought Ryan. In fact, he was right. He was in a middle of a clearing, surround by woods. He dropped his backpack (which disappeared before touching the ground) and started to walk. “Where am I?” shouted Ryan. “Preparations for your wish, Hinata,” said the same whispering voice from earlier. “What? My name is not Hinata, it’s Hinata,” said Ryan. His hands shot up to his mouth, because the voice that came out wasn’t his normal male voice, but a girl’s voice. Not any girl’s voice, but Hinata’s voice. He was also surprised at the name he called himself. He felt a strange tingling sensation pass through his body, and then noticed that the trees were getting taller. He looks down at his body, watching as the muscle mass disappears. In a few seconds, his body regresses back to what it looked like when he was seven. The little boy looked around, scared, and started to shrink again. He only lost a few inches, and his body became even skinnier. He now looked like a young girl, but with really short brown hair. His pants had fallen off, even his underwear. All he was wearing was his former red shirt, which was a dress on him. His face started to tingle again, and he lifted a hand to touch it. He saw his hand was much smaller than a boys hand, and when he felt his face, he noticed that it was softer, and rounder. He felt a strange pull from his groin region, and his chest tingled a bit. His butt felt a little off too. He reached a small hand down to his groin, and realized now that he was a girl. Her short brown hair grew out a bit, and her bangs grew until it touched her shoulders. She saw that her new hair color was purple. She let out a scream; it was still Hinata’s voice, but a more childish one. Hinata (Ryan) started to tear up, and her clothes started to change. The pants and underwear slid back on, and shrank down to become skin tight clothes that hugged her little body. Her red shirt start to fade until it was a light tan color, and a patch appeared on the left sleeve. The shirt gathered around her body, and the sleeves grew out. After finishing becoming a long sleeve shirt, the whole thing decided to change. The shirt got more cloth added to it somehow, and a hood started to form behind Hinata’s head. In a few seconds, the long sleeve t-shirt become a comfy, warm sweatshirt. Hinata looks over herself, and says, “Wow, I look like a little Hinata.” “Not yet,” said the voice. Hinata closed her eyes at the voice. She couldn’t tell, but her green eyes changed to pale purple eyes with no visible pupils. “Why did you do this to me?” cried the little girl. “You said you wanted to be Hinata,” replied the voice. “But, but, I didn’t want to be a little girl,” sobbed Hinata. “Well, to be someone, you must learn what they learn. What better way than being a 6 year old girl?” asked the voice. Just then Iruka walked around, spotted Hinata and said, “Hinata, there you are. We were scared sick. You alright?” asked Iruka. Hinata just nodded.
A request by :iconredryan2009: to make. He asked me to turn him into Hinata from Naruto. He showed me three pictures, one of a little girl Hinata, one of a teen Hinata at a beach, and one of an adult Hinata. I decided to make this 2 parts, simply because the ending of this made it feel that way.

Part 2: [link] is :iconredryan2009:
The voice.....belongs to someone, who....I dunno
Hinata and Iruka belong to kishimoto.
The picture of little Hinata: [link]
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hibarikyouya4's avatar
even after all this time thats passed i still think this is some of my favorite stuff youve written

you should do moe naruto tg stuff , or just anything truly cause anything you write is pure awesomeness